While I appreciate your attempt mother, you seemed to have forgotten the fact that standard haiku follows the convention of 5-7-5. You seem to be using non-standard haiku with a form of 5-6-3. While also entertaining, it may behoove you to call this segment Nan's Not-Quite-a-Haiku for the day.
hahaha. Although my Haiku crash course DID mention a bunch of dumb rules, I chose to ignore finding out what they were in the interest of just having fun. However, I recognize your overwhelming need to be picky and condescending, so I will TRY fix the haiku, but I'm still not going back to read the rules! Like flies on honey the headhunters keep coming more job offers now
Happy now? It thrills me to see that you're putting your university education to such good use! Henceforth, Nan's "I-don't-give-a-shit-about-the-rules" haiku du jour. At my age life has just gotta start being about FUN!
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Nan's Haiku for the day:
Like flies on honey
Headhunters keep coming
Job offers
While I appreciate your attempt mother, you seemed to have forgotten the fact that standard haiku follows the convention of 5-7-5. You seem to be using non-standard haiku with a form of 5-6-3. While also entertaining, it may behoove you to call this segment Nan's Not-Quite-a-Haiku for the day.
hahaha. Although my Haiku crash course DID mention a bunch of dumb rules, I chose to ignore finding out what they were in the interest of just having fun. However, I recognize your overwhelming need to be picky and condescending, so I will TRY fix the haiku, but I'm still not going back to read the rules!
Like flies on honey
the headhunters keep coming
more job offers now
Happy now? It thrills me to see that you're putting your university education to such good use! Henceforth, Nan's "I-don't-give-a-shit-about-the-rules" haiku du jour. At my age life has just gotta start being about FUN!
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